Talk:Unfeeling Desire Sizar/@comment-43509892-20200102122748

Here's a grammar check, it probably won't be read but Sizar is my favorite character so ima do it anyway (PS: I do not speak Korean, I am just fixing grammar and spicing up the text):

"We've had a lot of trouble in this war, thank you Sizar."

"I just did what I had to do-"

Sizar had done his part, but wanted to return to the battle anyway. This time with his 'created beings', Elysia greets him personally. Formal as he is, Sizar bows his head to her almost mechanically-

"but the war isn't over yet. I'm looking forward to it."

"Sure you are."

"Say, in that magic library, did you find what you were looking for?"

She recalled giving the key to the Magic Academy to Sizar with a favor. There were theories about the information found there, that it could turn the tide of the war. Sizar responded in a dull tone.

"I'm going to need more time."

"I see. Well, the clock's ticking, I can only tell you good luck, but please find something soon."

"Understood."

Sizar returned to his guild, 'Aztit' of the Black Fortress. As he entered the room, he immediately approached the desk and opened the book that laid waiting for him. Various paintings, memos, and explanatory reminders detailing magic filled both sides of the paper. As he passed through the pages, there was a description of an experiment with pictures of different races.

'... Combine the necessary parts, considering the characteristics of each race. Then use a portion of the emerald tablet to replace the heart. This way, the Dark Magic Research Tower has created a chimera...'

"..."

Sizar, who was silently turning over the pages for a while, immediately covered the book as if it had ended. On the back of the book there was a small mark of the Magic Academy.